The composition is probably spot on, and your smile is confident and friendly - great. But the colours between your shirt and the backdrop are a washout for me... which is a shame, because you would easily madel a stronger and more dynamic shot, without appearing to be any less friendly and professional.
BTW, you should also add your name in front of the title, we're all in the people business at the end of the night.
I therefore rate you 7, but I'm looking forward to my COO becoming a ten.
Sorry, but there is a finger sticking up from the bottom of the pic, that spoils it for me. And I think without a suitable necktie it's too casual... How about some respect, you big woof!
Nice photo Jennifer, and appropriate for your business sector. However, I think you would improve this shot if you crop out the post growing from your left shoulder, and though not obvious in the small pic above, your larger profile shot shows red-eye... or is that the intentional demon in you? LOL. Getting rid of red-eye is pretty easy if you're savy with the software, which is freely available, but if you're not I'm sure a friend in your line would be able to help... it's worth fixing.
Hi Joel, personally I prefer the more casual shot you've posted - your profile pic is too frontal for my taste, but I also understand that professional snappers shy away from "mug" style shots, that kind of strip the character from the model... the shot I prefer shows great character and refelects, in my opinion, someone that's open, confident and easy to do business with.
I like your moody soulful look "Lyric Sol", it certainly suits your business, but I think you should add your name. We're all in the people business and it's you that counts, in the middle of the night.
Like Julio I also think you should crop some of the bacground and bring your face closer to the front. The fact is profile shots are designed to show you off and give potential contacts a reasonable perception of "you". The space typically allocated for profile pic's is always on the small side, which is why you should make the best use of the space available... in your shot for example I estimate a third of your space is the backdrop. If one was say in the landscape business, or a racing driver the same would apply... it simply doesn't makes sense to cram such small spaces with shots of your garden or some Grand Prix circuit, etc., with you, the focus of attention, rattling around there somewhere.
Your shot, unlike some others here, is easy to fix with some gentle cropping and, beyond what I have said above, it's near perfect - in my view.
On this basis I rate your 7.5 as is, but 9 with a crop.