what the first way should i do ?

Hi,
I'm a newbies affiliate in this business and need more knowledge of that...I've got my own blog. i was created it a few days ago but I'm not confident of my blog. i would like to know that can or not i post my blog here?. I've attached my blog below

http://moreclick4u.blogspot.com

i though something wrong with my blog. Can you give me more tips to upgrade it nicely?